Sometimes, all it needs is a fresh set of eyes.

Even the great writers of script and screen can get bogged down from time to time. Whether it’s structure, pacing, dialogue or the dreaded passive protagonist - sometimes a screenplay needs an extra writing brain that isn’t as close to the work as its creator’s.

I offer a bespoke script reading service with the sole aim of fixing problems and getting the writing process back on track. For projects that are 120 pages or under (I can requote on longer projects), writers will fill out a brief questionnaire and choose a service from the list below:

A one-page analysis of the work with a focus on structural and narrative fixes - £150

Dialogue doctor, to punch up the verbal exchanges in your script - £180

Script notes, that feedback page-by-page on formatting, grammar and any other errors, as well as top-line comments and suggestions on the general flow of the script - £220

The full service, includes everything above in a single package - £350

If you have any questions or would like to book a script service, don’t hesitate to get in touch.

If you’d like to see me in action, check out my podcast ‘The Great Hollywood Rewrite’ where myself and members of ‘The Script Department’ analyse issues with Hollywood scripts and remedy them.